genre: comedy
logline: A group of teens are drinking at a party, one guy drinks too much and enjoys his whole night in the bathroom floor.
synopsis:
A group of teenagers have a party at one guy's house because his parents are out of town. They have two bottles of liquor and an empty house to themselves. They hang out and take shots, but one guy keeps on drinking large amounts really fast. Soon after that, he stumbles his way to the bathroom to vomit. He lays in the bathroom floor for hours trying recollect himself. Later on that night, a girl runs through the door and pukes in the toilet beside the guy laying in the floor. It wasn't long until everyone at the party was standing at the bathroom door pointing and laughing.
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Your logline did not make me curious about the content of your film. It does not leave any intrigue.
I think that you need to re-write your synopsis; you could take this and put it in to a storyboard with very little elaboration. Perhaps you should try looking at this story from a specific angle to further develop your content.
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